Tuesday, January 13, 2009

My Boring Winter Holiday

In December, I went to England for holiday with my cousin and my family. It was winter there. The weather was so cold so they spent most of the time sleeping in the hotel, but I spent my time watching television. This is not the worst thing in this holiday. The worst thing in this holiday is my brother stayed in England to study so no one will now play with me at home.This is the most boring holiday I ever had.

3 comments:

  1. Perhaps you could write a little more detail. Even if it was boring, you could write about the TV shows you watched. You could also write about the kinds of food you ate - I'm sure you had to eat while you were on holiday. Sometimes, all you need are the little things to make a story interesting. :-)

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